tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post7188656027064097253..comments2007-10-17T14:47:17.257-05:00Dan Wilcoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12398265012182104454noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post-15635343211767647572007-10-17T14:47:00.000-05:002007-10-17T14:47:00.000-05:00>>Sorry the War poem sucked!<BR/><BR/>Funny...it was still one of my favorite poems of the night.rushmchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11300622174153812004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post-42446227557225838622007-10-09T17:56:00.000-05:002007-10-09T17:56:00.000-05:00Don't bother with the accents. As long as you spell the name correctly (which you have always carefully done).<BR/>Therese.Therese(sans accent)poetry.blog-city.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post-52877968475567168692007-10-09T09:46:00.000-05:002007-10-09T09:46:00.000-05:00Actually that version as written, on later reflection, I thought it sucked. It was rambling and disjointed. <BR/><BR/>I hate hearing a sucky poem so my apology stands for forcing people to hear my sucky poem.Tim V.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post-19783457343191305212007-10-09T08:41:00.000-05:002007-10-09T08:41:00.000-05:00I didn't say it sucked; those terms are descriptive, not a value judgment. The poem needs work to make it effective, make it say what you want it to say.Dan Wilcoxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12398265012182104454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-765720094859722055.post-66331194603152858182007-10-08T23:21:00.000-05:002007-10-08T23:21:00.000-05:00Sorry the War poem sucked!Tim Verhaegennoreply@blogger.com